Revision Process Coaching Packages
The Revision Strategist—and Cheerleader, Too
This package focuses on revision planning and forward motion with the revision process. It’s for people who have completed a manuscript and are struggling to revise, overwhelmed or confused by feedback, or otherwise in need of a knowledgeable and encouraging guide for this next part of the journey.
(Per 4-Week Period)
Tier 1 includes:
• 1 Coaching Session
• 1 Office Hours Chat
• Biweekly Homework OR weekly Email Check-In OR Voice Messaging
Tier 2 (More Support) includes:
• 2 Coaching Sessions
• 2 Office Hours Chats
• Pre-Session Reading: Draft Pages (for session 2)
• Biweekly Homework OR weekly Email Check-In OR Voice Messaging
Tier 3 (The Biggest Boost) includes:
• 4 Coaching Sessions
• Written Feedback: On Big-Picture, Story-Level Issues
• Written Feedback: On Style, Mechanics, and Other Paragraph- and Sentence-Level Issues
• Weekly Email Check-In OR Voice Messaging
More about those options:
Coaching Session
(Per 4-Week Period)
Tier 1 includes:
• 1 Coaching Session
• 1 Office Hours Chat
• Biweekly Homework OR weekly Email Check-In OR Voice Messaging
Tier 2 (More Support) includes:
• 2 Coaching Sessions
• 2 Office Hours Chats
• Pre-Session Reading: Draft Pages (for session 2)
• Biweekly Homework OR weekly Email Check-In OR Voice Messaging
Tier 3 (The Biggest Boost) includes:
• 4 Coaching Sessions
• Written Feedback: On Big-Picture, Story-Level Issues
• Written Feedback: On Style, Mechanics, and Other Paragraph- and Sentence-Level Issues
• Weekly Email Check-In OR Voice Messaging
More about those options:
Coaching Session
- Pre-session check-in questionnaire to help you gather your thoughts and reflect productively, and to let me know what you’re needing, wanting, dreaming, and achieving
- 30 minutes on Zoom (or text chat in Discord), personalized to your goals and whatever you and your project need most right now
- Post-session email from me with meeting notes and next steps, within 48 hours of our meeting
- 30 minutes on Zoom (or text chat in Discord), no session prep or wrap-up email
- For when you have questions, want to talk through an idea, or need help brainstorming solutions for an annoying writing problem!
- Stay in touch with voice messages (recorded and sent through Discord direct messages). This is useful for people who like to think things through aloud, who have an easier time formulating questions this way rather than in writing, or who feel motivated by the connection of voice-to-voice communication. You can commit to a schedule or reach out whenever you want.
- Includes up to 30 minutes/month of voice messages from you, plus voice responses from me within 2 business days.
- A weekly, personalized nudge on the day of your choice, bugging you (but, like, in a nice way!) about your goals, deadlines, or writing life. Then you let me know how things are going, have a nice brag, and rework any goals that need it.
- Every other week (so, twice per coaching month), you’ll receive a relevant, personalized writing prompt, revision exercise, resource to explore, or other creativity or skills boost, via email. Send me your responses if you want and get gold stars! We can also look at or talk about your homework-based realizations and questions during our sessions.
- Review of up to 4,000 words of fiction draft/manuscript to discuss in session
- Please get me your words at least 3 business days before our scheduled coaching session.
- Written feedback on up to 2,000 words, attending to issues in the general neighborhood of style—think voice, clarity, precision, readability, flow, point of view, and more—and mechanics, focusing on whatever you want and/or whatever the writing currently needs.
- Please get me your words at least 5 business days before our scheduled coaching session.
- You’ll receive my feedback in Comments and Track Changes on your Word document at least 24 hours before our next session; then we can talk about any questions or ideas it’s raised for you.
- Written feedback on up to 4,000 words (with an option for up to 8,000 words, priced separately), attending to big-picture issues such as plot, structure, conflict, character arc, point of view, pacing, theme, worldbuilding, and genre conventions.
- Please get me your words at least 5 business days before our scheduled coaching session.
- You’ll receive my feedback in an email (and possibly some Comments and Track Changes on your Word document, if appropriate to the issues I’m noticing) at least 24 hours before our next session; then we can talk about any questions or ideas it’s raised for you.
